|Reviews for I Will Paint the Sea|
| Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
Your colorful descriptions jolt life into the pages. I envision her heavenly colors paining the sky during her romantic rendezvous. I can see her world turn gray with the emotions she lights up in a mound and I wind up seeing an empowered woman instead of a sad one. It's as if the rain washed out the colors of "heaven" and the gray from the flames... I see a persona who is able to see the world for what it is.
I wanted to thank you for the review(s) but I ended up taking a lot of pleasure in reading your writings. 3
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
Heartbreaking and vivid poem this is. Felt like Yoda there. Beautiful imagery and drew me into this persona's joy then sorrow. A gentle contrast and transition with line "looks like hers" I only got to say this fellow's sky is darker because of the heartbreak he unintentionally caused. I want to hug the persona and say, "One day you will find your love."