Reviews for Ebbing Battle Cry
atalantea chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
This song reminds me of the song "I can't make you love me." It's sad and hopeless and you really feel the persona begging, especially the numerous times "love me" was said in the poem.

Personally, I would prefer a stronger ending though, one that wraps the whole poem together and one that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

Keep writing!