Reviews for Opposites Attract |
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![]() ![]() ![]() naww johnny boy! i hope theres a sequel! ima go and check now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahah its funny! although she has a wierd character. is she like smart freaky loner girl, or smart normal chick, or just plain smart? :S |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a good story. I enjoyed reading it. The only thing, though is that I wish the story was longer but overall it was very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww...lol fantastic story! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. interesting ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() CUTE ! to the max |
![]() ![]() This is good. -nods- Yeah. Just one thing... DON'T put AN's in the middle of the story (for example- AN: like now)cos' it completely ruins the effect. But other than that... good job! |
![]() ![]() sounds interesting- just don't do that (A/N: aueipjfkj) thing in the middle of the story/chapter whatever- it's a little distracting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh that was great. cya later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just have on bit of constructive criticism for this story: DO NOT have author's notes within the text of the story itself. It's distracts the reader, and it kind of annoying. How many published books or stories on fictionpress for tha matter have you read that the author has AN's within the story. Here's an example of this mistake: (A/N: I know, run on sentence. My teacher would be mad.) Yes, we know it's a run-on, bt probably wouldn't have paid that much attention if you had not pointed it out. I'm sorry to be so harsh, I just thought that really needed to be fixed. OTher thanb that your story is wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *tear* it was beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() That [prod] was [jab] [the [stab] best [ nudge] ending [bunt] ever! [punch, shove, dig, thrust]. Oops? [looks at bloody knife]. Uhm...blood isn't red by any chance, is it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() puh-LEASE tell me that wasn't the end? PLEEAASE? -attempts puppy eyes- well, whatever. good job. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() u r oficially my favorite author! i love the story opposites attract. im gonna go see if u have more stories now... so like yeah.. ttyl! |