Weirdly, I quite like the ghoul that caught Taliesin and Celena! It was nice to see the development of other characters in this chapter :)

I'm curious about the daemon sub-species, is there one for every deadly sin as well as lust or only a few? It was a good chapter, I liked how you showed that Taliesin is at a big disadvantage to the daemons it makes it more realistic, well as realistic as this sort of story can be! I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Even though the story's not very far along, I think it looks quite interesting and I enjoyed the first few chapters a lot! I hope you continue to update it :)

Omg love so far! Update soon:)