|Reviews for Lilith|
| Vul Soren chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Interesting combination, twisting around the man's religion and into her thrall. Ever thought of making it into a short story that's only one chapter but long and capturing the man's emotion in this poem into thoughts, I think if you did hat t would be sweet-just don't forget to rate it M if you go into more details.