Reviews for The Competitive Fiasco |
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![]() ![]() the last part AWWWWWWWwwwwww i LOVE it larady already can't wait cool great |
![]() ![]() too cute, funny. love stephen |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU blow me away your writing is too good how did you come up with it? i want stephen and michael. i love hailey they have awesome chemistry PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE! I AM BEGGING YOU! I LOVE IT :3 :3 I live for your stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha! These two are so funny, I swear. Their conversations are always so entertaining, heh. Can't wait to see what happens next! I swear this is such a good opportunity, getting locked in together... Although I guess they're still getting used to each other? Ugh, it's too bad really :P the make-out suggestion sounds nice :P |
![]() ![]() can't stp laughing lolz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol! This is really good. I'm actually really glad it's not a one shot! XD Stephen is an interesting character and such a flirt. XD I also love that her best friends are dating and she's sort of the third wheel! Talk about bad luck! XD |
![]() ![]() Me likey |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far, I love it! I love your characters personalities. This is going to be a great story, especially because your writing is good. Please continue to update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not really into romance too much, but this looks like it can turn out to be really cute XD I love Stephen and Hailey interacting with each other. Even though you know in the back of your mind, they'll probably end up together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! I LOVE STEPHEN :3 :3 i think i may like him even more than michael now your writing is so amazing i can't stop reading cannot wait for 500 and this so happy to be reading this I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT PLZ PLZ UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha! This sounds really cute! And I really like both Stephen and Hailey's personalities. I'm glad Hailey isn't the typical shrinking 'good girl' type, heh. Makes it all feel more real :D can't wait to see where this goes! |
![]() ![]() Omg I am in love with your writing! Canot wait for next chappie |
![]() ![]() This is going to be great. I can already tell. It might be a cliche, but like you said, I do expect a twist. I am a massive lover of cliches anyway so I'll wait. Hailey is different and Stephen charming. I enjoy their banter. Update soon! Sounds promising enough |
![]() ![]() I was hoping for a 500 update but I already love your new story! and omg Stephen Love the description in the box plz update on both great job x) |