Lol, you used the same text from another chapter. Except, you forgot to replace George with Eric... ROFL BoD

I like the second one more! The first one seemed sorta abrupt, but the second one seemed a bit too long? :)

"As they exchange MANLY pats,"

Highlight of my day.

*exchanges manly pat with besties* Yes.

I like both of them, but I think the 1st beginning os better.

Girl, seriously get some sleep, you can complain when Noah wakes up, but now? Go take a nap.

Great story! :)

Noah, you can do it! Well he's bound to be okay soon... Right?

... am I tge only one seeing all the code?

I think you have a problem here...

It's not completely heartless... Its not like HE killed her. Besides. She was a B*tch. SHE was heartless... and a little nutty. Well at least Noah isn't dead.

Great chapter!

Sharla, if you want him to live (and if you wanna get the blood stains out of your clothes) you'd better get off of him. Well good luck Noah. Don't die on us. That would be a sh*tty ending for Sharla...

Awsome story! Keep up the great work!

well that happened...

Okay. Now wake up Noah! *pokes him with stick* is he dead?

Great story can't wait for the next chapter!

I this sooo much Keep writing I wanna know how they get out safely

Courtney? :D That sure was an interesting chapter~

Well that was unexpected. Talk about a desperate crush. O_o

I hate you. JK. Why did you do this to mee. Y u cliffhanger. I don't hate you so plz posttttt~~~~~~