|Reviews for Holding the Magic Mirror|
| atalantea chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
Language young lady! :P
Aside from that your rhythm in this piece is spot on. In my head it plays like a taunt and I think that worked well with the message of the poem.
Great job portraying a very, very angry persona... I'm surprised she didn't break the mirror over the other girl's head. You showed how angry she was versus literally telling the reader she was angry, and that's what good poets do. :)
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
Whoa! That took quite a turn. I liked the beginning most of all, although it seemed you were missing some commas. That being said, while the beginning came off as intelligently harsh, by the end, it was more of a rant. Such a delightful start earns a stronger ending, I think.
That being said, it was a solid piece of work. :)