Reviews for Thirst
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
ouch painful! Great metaphor.
Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
This is your best haiku yet!

You literally expressed, perhaps, one of the biggest slices of life in a way that is excruciatingly powerful. It is a slow and deadly torment that ridicules one's thirst for something that should be free to everyone.
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
I love it! Wonderful discription. So much water - none of it what you need.