Reviews for Orfeus's Wail
RainbowJH chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Another good poem. I can feel the torment you describe, the sharpness felt like shards of glass embedded in the palm of your hands. I like that Shakespearean touch to the poem. There is this last line "sweet cursing loathe scorn" - I feel that breaks the flow. The reader has to stop and think twice to understand the sentence. Try to make it something simpler. Overall, not a bad one. Keep writing!