Reviews for Brilliant
Synthey chapter 1 . 2/7
FELLOW HAIKU LOVER! I love the whole concept of the personification of elements of nature and this one does so elegantly even with the sad undertones!
FluffyChipmunk chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
Good job! I really like it, especially since most haikus I see are written by twelve year olds.
Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
You're the one who got me into these and this piece in particular suits your title to the letter.

P.S- Welcome back! Your readers missed you. :3
Risuux chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
This is very spot on; definitely my kind of poetry. This is one that will keep ringing not only in your ears, but also in your heart, long after you've finished reading.

In these three lines, I felt so much pity for those people, who, like the sun, are always being taken for granted just because they look so strong on the outside that others do not even bother to ask how they're doing.
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Provocative!
Marisa Chuikova chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Harasho ))