|Reviews for Night life|
| Marcie Gore chapter 1 . 1/1/2003
THat was So of it reminds me of the Street kids of BRAZerl But that could be any in the world which TRagic. America one of the Richest Counties in theWorld But Still have starving kids. Thanks for using your art to remind us of the sadness in the world.
| sinister velvet chapter 1 . 10/30/2001
| Ragdoll chapter 1 . 6/22/2001
Thought provoking and unsettling - I think we all need to think about this stuff. I wrote a fairly similar poem recently. You must be from the UK because fag means gay in the USA doesn't it?... Most of the people on this site might not know you mean cigarette. Also maybe it would have been better if the middle section of poetry was properly broken into lines. However I think you did a good job - especially the last bit about the kids dying again because this sort of thing is going on all the time, it leaves the reader something to think about.