Well this was lovely! Initially, I questioned why this was labeled under poetry, but having read the full eork, you were absolutely correct.

Great job!

I love this! I especially liked - well - everything! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work! :)

...no words are available as of yet because the reviewer's having trouble thinking of a suitably elegant reply. Too busy staring at screen with a star-face-from-Howrse expression. Oddly, it makes this reviewer wonder who the knights are. XD This is awesome, girl! D

this is a beautiful peace of work, so lovely. i wish I was that girl.

So...very...beautiful...*Starry-eyed face from Howrse here* It's all so clearly visible. *Another starry-eyed face* So...very...beautiful...