Reviews for Breathe
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
I really enjoy how you separate I/Can't/Breath. The separation makes it feel exactly like I really can't breathe; frantically drawing a breath between each word, trying to communicate.

Love it.
Lie Ono chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
This reminds me of a panic attack.
This is a beautiful piece. Keep writing.
patriciapanaligan chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
I like how you've managed to capture the imagery and make us feel as if we were the ones in this situation. You are very great with words, Keep it up!