|Reviews for The Elementals|
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/21/2015
The "Previously..." section at the top is actually very useful - thank you!
| retiredaccount1 chapter 2 . 7/8/2015
This is actually pretty good. I would have liked to know a bit more backstory of the characters, as all the events seem really sudden. But, this has certainly caught my attention and perhaps you intend you return and explain the past in more detail throughout later chapters. Not too many problems with this story, I like it.