|Reviews for A Handful of Dust|
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/10/2016
Finish the damn story u lazy ass.
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
This is a really solid first chapter, and I especially enjoy how smoothly you let us know what your characters look like, without sitting me down and saying: okay, this is Sanjay. Tall dude.
There were a couple times where it felt like diction got away from you, as if you were putting too much into trying to make it seem poetic. Beyond that, this was very solid. Well done!