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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I would like to invite you to join our platform to present a good quality story to our readers! Kindly send me a message if this offer piqued your interest |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOODNESS, THE FREAKIN' JERK! I can't believe someone would do that to you :'( I'm so sorry. I've always worried about that happening to my stories. I'm glad you found out, though! I hate people that do that. -Angel Princess 31 |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry but it seems like this person has plagiarized your story and has just replaced the names/pronouns. story/view/1144655/me-and-you-kai-dahyun-jackson-sana-twice-tzuyu-satzu |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHOOOHOO! Fan-fucking-tastic. Wish I could have Vinnie or Hailey as a friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SQUUEEEE! I ACTUALLY REMEMBERED THE CODE NUMBER FOR THIS CHAPTER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gee, Vinnie, don't be so hard on your brother (considering that Dimitri is quite weak and Vinnie is stronger), and geez, Dimitri, try getting depression, fighting out of it, and also, are you 10 inches taller than your brother? That's how you beat up your brother in a second! (Though I'm such a lamb, I have never even beat up my sister) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oi, stop treating Dimitri this bad! He may be thy hated boy but come on, he's got a younger brother who TOTALLY rocks more than he does! And maybe Dimitri should get a life (cough cough LIFE cough cough) for once! -Athena (based off of personal experience) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dimitri rules. Angie kinda sucks. Vinnie sucks. Owen rules. The two suckers get together. It's simple. And the ruler rules over the girl once the sucker breaks up with the sucker. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me: Last time I checked, I was the more easy-going sister. Louise: Mwahahahahaha (scratches my arm with her natural 2 centimetre fingernails) Me: Last time I checked, my sister was Vinnie and I was Dimitri. Except she doesn't cuss. I do. (calm expression lol no blood) Lilliana: Louise: get out (Except Louise would probably be not doing the dishes and if I were that violent, she would have been underneath my foot since Louise is 10 inches shorter than I am) Good writing. |
![]() ![]() You should definitely do a sequel for this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a quirky little beginning. :) I did find it odd the way Angie spoke to the boy - she doesn't sound like any six year old I've met. Beyond that, however, I thought this was really well done. I look forward to finding out how the two are connected! |
![]() ![]() I've spent the past couple of days reading this and I think you should do a sequel. Obviously only do it if you have time and want to but at least consider it because this story was really good. I'd love to see what adventures Angie & Vinnie have now that they are officially together. |
![]() ![]() This was soooo freaking AWESOME!Im super sad it has to end tho. THEY FINALLY GOT TOGETHER THOUGH AND I'M SO HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY They are seriously the cutest thing everrrr! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I was gonna leave my review for when I'd finished reading for the day to see how far I could get, but I had to come and scream at you after this. THIS CHAPTER WAS JUST TOO CUTE! I'm literally like, dying after that, and the message on the bear? AHHHHHH. How could you do this, when I know that she's with Shane...but, but Vinnie is...AHHHHH! Also, I knew the little kid would be Vinnie. I had my suspicions from the moment they met. So many more great chapters before, and I'm sure several more to go :) (I spotted a couple mistakes throughout the chapters I've just read but I'll send them to you in a PM?) x |