Reviews for Vertigo
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
This is just gorgeous. An absolutely phenomenal piece of writing. Moving, yet concise. I loved it.
The Gone Angel chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
I doubt I'll be able to write the intelligent review you deserve, but I can try. First of all, my favorite part was probably when he was just a baby, but all of it was amazing. The description was wonderful and the characters kept me interested. I loved how you made it all at night even though the character grew up and the part with the girl and a different kind of fireworks... Awww. That was adorable. You kind of tortured me though. Some parts were sweet while others made me close to tears. It really messed with my head!

Again, awesome job. Good luck in the contest because I'm coming for you. ;D (Just kidding.)

let me delete this chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
I know this review is late, but I deliberately procrastinated in writing a review as I knew that any review I came up with, no matter if it was long or short, would not be adequate enough to express my love and adoration for this beautiful story.

Okay, first of all - I love this kid. He's just so adorable. The boy's perspective is refreshingly light, and his description of the universe and it's complexities in such a wide-eyed, childish manner makes me want to smile. I can't help but feel sorry for him - POOR BABY!

The ending - ugh, the ending, omw - you stuck to fluff! Though I did feel that you jumped from his mother's death to the birth of his baby very quickly - but, as this whole thing was fast-paced, I should have definitely prepared myself for a quick and cute ending.

Anyways, to sum it all up, aMAZING :) I hope you keep writing these.. (can i call stories delicious) delicious and wonderful stories, and I wish you all the best of luck in the contest. 3

((can i name the boy chris and the girl hayley just bECaUsE i am trash))
Rosetta Bronze chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
I really really like this :3 I love how we aren't given much information about the characters, but we're given enough to make us like them and to make us interested in the story- I love how you chose to "present" (?) his life through the nights and how they flowed together without any explanations needed, and it's all told from kind of an outsider's standpoint... as the others have already told you, you did a really good job :)
sristars chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
This was the most emotional piece I've ever read. Wow. I love it so much.

No matter how many times I enter, you've got me beat. :P

Jacob Snippets chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
The story was very touching and we felt for the characters even though we didn't know much about them. It was short but said so much. It requires talent to write like this. Although in some parts it could have been better, I enjoyed this short story, despite its slightly depressing nature at times. In conclusion, this was a well written story that I thought was nice.
Sunnycanary chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
Aww this was so cute! I loved how this described his life, especially the way one time period flowed into the next. I loved how you referenced the night and fireworks in the entire story, and your writing style just suits this so so perfectly 3
This was very enjoyable to read! :3
Quinny chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
It has been SO LONG since I read your writing and it was entirely worth the wait. This is glorious! Perfectly written and flows along beautifully. As amazing as you always were, you've only improved! 3
Inspirational Flows chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
Oh my gosh that was so cute, and really sad too. I like how you told the whole story, really good. :)