don't kill me, i know this review is late.

auk, i love this. it's definitely depressing (well, of course, especially since it's dealing with such a heavy topic) but there is still a faint flicker of hope in the girl's perspective - and that, that is beautiful.
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GOSH DARN IT. SUICIDE STORIES ARE ONE OF MY WEAKNESSES.

You wrote this very well and I am delighted to see that the main character changed her mind about her suicidal thoughts, but I am also really upset that the man died to convince her otherwise. ;-;

Good luck, Sri! May the odds ever be in your favor. ;)

Cheers,
Gone

Wow, this was really deep. I loved the way you described the night in the first half - I actually felt like I was the one riding the bike. I also really liked the way you described the man and his last moments, even if it was very sad.

Awh, that's so sad- suicides are always so sad. i swear, at first I thought she was going to kill herself because I didn't know why else she wouldn't get changed first, or stop to pick up her glasses, haha. I like that she "sees" his last thoughts, and I like that you didn't reveal why she went there so often in the first place until the end, then it makes sense :) good job, I rate it 10/10 dead bodies at the bottom of the cliff. Too soon?

Awww, this is so sad and beautifully written, omw. :O D: You did a great job with this, Sri! Everything flows so amazingly. I really enjoyed this- ack, it's so sad. ;-; Great job!