|Reviews for the night is a canvas|
| sristars chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
I love the way your words flow in this, how they introduce unexpected concepts all over the place and how the reader receives a pleasant surprise in every nook and corner of it. :3 It's wonderfully written! I love it very much. :)
| The Gone Angel chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
That... was really descriptive. There were so many lines I liked and could easily picture in my mind if I took the time to, so I'll probably have to go back and read it carefully again. I liked it a lot though. It's really different from everyone else's entries. Shorter, but it's a lot more descriptive because of how you used certain words and how certain sentences flowed. I don't even know where I'm going with my review, to be honest. xD
Good luck, Sunshine. :) I'm not sure how this will play out because the entries are so diverse!
| let me delete this chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
eeKK I am terribly late in reviewing, please don't kill me.
I love this! Your metaphors are so vivid in description and I can just imagine the sky - the sky as a canvas - as an artist's palette - so good job with the description. You paint a picturesque picture of the sky.
| Lie Ono chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
Wow, this is a piece of art! You words made it easier to imagine all of this. I loved this piece! Keep writing!
| Rosetta Bronze chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
you know what, Sunny, I've /seen/ the night before, but I still kept reading- it's so interesting how you described something that we've all seen/experienced, but you made it seem so much more magical, and your descriptions set the scene so perfectly... :3 yay
| Cheesy C chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
That was beautiful!
| A Pencil in her hand chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
Oh my gosh, you're going to win. This was glorious, Sunny. Absolutely beautiful. &hearts I love love love it. *tacklehugs* Great job!