Reviews for Imprisoned
cardiff1984 chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
I love the ending, they could never survive the apocalypse on their own or what caused it.
gracegraceful10 chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
Continue on - I want to know what happens :)
J.M. Black chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
This story is very well written. I took a peek at your profile and judging by how many stories you've written, it's obvious that you have perfecting this craft for a long time. It's truly impressive, and this story is indicative of that.
The last line is what truly makes the story. Of course, this can open a world to a much bigger plot. If there's any constructive criticism to be given, I would suggest working a little more of the characters. Perhaps by giving them more of a background (then again, it's a very short story and that might not have been your intent initially). Sometimes even personalizing the dialogue to fit the characters more is enough to help the reader relate or hold interest.
Regardless, I really enjoyed this story and it's very well written.

Keep writing!