Reviews for Wasted
Lie Ono chapter 1 . 7/21/2015
Woah, this was impactful. It kinda reminds me of the fear of feeling something that's our own, like how social media controls some people's lives.
I'm just rambling now, but this was beautiful! Keep writing!
Lilith S chapter 1 . 7/21/2015
Can I just say right now that this was amazing. Despite popular belief of most of the writers/readers on here, a story shouldn't be judged based on pure word/chapter count. In less than a thousand words, you created a beautiful masterpiece. From the first sentence you got me hooked. I love the short alliteration you had at the very beginning. "Sleek silver sheets." It's descriptive yet poetic, which despite me not being a very big fan of poetry, I love.
I also love how your character is almost doubting themselves too. It's not unusual, but the way you write it, there are no words to explain how well you wrote it. It's truly beautiful.
I hope it's not too much to ask, but I'd love to see what you think of my own stories, even if you just read a first chapter.
Whatever you choose, it doesn't matter. This was a beautiful short story.
Thanks for writing. :)