okay, so finally, i will give you the review you deserve 3 *punches self* BAD WILDSY

this is amazing! the structure of the whole thing and the sentence flow is just.. i can't even describe. it all fits together seamlessly like a puzzle. i really like the way you use your words - especially your adjectives - it's like each word is carefully selected and picked out to make some kind of equilibrium throughout the story.

anyways, i loved it 3

Awww ;-; awwwww...AWWWW...darn I can't stop aww-ing. This was just really, REALLY cute, and it also has this mysterious vibe that ties well with the nighttime theme. I love the way you described the meeting of these two strangers and how they found comfort in each other; truly wonderful descriptive writing, Bronzie! Anyways, good luck! :D

it's beautiful.
so much love in my soul for this beautiful piece of writing. i want to be under that night sky•

love you, bronzue~

sri

Wow, Bronzie, this is so beautiful omg :o I love how you described the night and also how the boy and the girl's stories ended up intertwining. It flowed really well and I could imagine it all happening in my mind :3 Great job!

Ughhh this was so gorgeous, I love it. *dies and clutches heart* (This is GG who is lazy)
You put together words in such a poetic, effortless flow that makes people feel things they didn't even know they needed to feel. I don't know, I just really love your writing because it's beautiful and wistful, and intelligent and awesome. I love the end, d'awwwwww.