Reviews for Not Yours Truly
mgold8 chapter 21 . 2/13
I just wanted to comment that this is the absolute very best rendition of the "emo-gay-boy-gets-closeted-popular-jock-and-they-live-happily-ever-after" genre that I've ever read. I would have given anything to be able to read a story like this back when I was in high school. Still, better 20 years later, than never. Virtually every writer who takes a shot at doing this type of story fails because their story devolves into an unintentional parody. Or their story devolves into cheesy gay porn. I don't know how you did it, but you managed to make an inherently unrealistic storyline seem totally realistic. And your sex scene puts the professional pornographers at Nifty to shame. Thank you so much for writing this awesome, uplifting story - and for sharing it with us readers. Reading this story has brought me great joy and I am so grateful to have stumbled across it. You are an amazingly talented writer! Thank you, thank you, thank you. Mike
Asmile chapter 21 . 1/22/2017
Well wasn't this just adorable ;)
rAiNwAtEr1 chapter 21 . 8/23/2016
I loved this story from the beginning until the very end. What beautifully paced story telling. Thank you. I look forward to reading more stories by you.
The Somniac chapter 8 . 4/7/2016
I'm glad I gave this story a chance: the last couple of chapters have really been coming to life for me. You're doing a lot more showing than telling - you're letting the characters' actions color their intentions rather than laying out a skeleton of what they're doing and why.
Guest chapter 21 . 2/10/2016
Hopefully they've learned to add lube to their sexual escapades ;D
TMi The Dork in the Corner chapter 21 . 2/8/2016
Full circle ending. It was great. I think I even cried a little while reading the last bit. .. so excited and sad to see this end great job.
Karunjaal chapter 21 . 2/8/2016
Aw, they stayed together even in college! How sweet. And all that before it...what a cute ending to a neat story. Thanks for writing it!
guest chapter 21 . 2/8/2016
its too cute I can't handle it! is this the last chapter or will there be an epilogue? it doesn't say complete yet and what about the prequel?
FuriaJump chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
Woaw, Hum, I think Paige and him are really mean with this whole thing and I'm kind of sorry for Noah. I mean, he did say he don't do relationship, why fuck with him? Gah, I can't understand the logic behind Paige's vengence. She's as superficial as Noah, even more that she have to hurt him whilst he don't look like a jerk. I didn't even understand why the main character was so against him in the end when he wasn't okay with the whole catfish thing in the beginning.
I'm kind of afraid to see how this whole vengence would affect Noah...Hummm, great chapter, though!
Guest chapter 19 . 1/16/2016
Wouldn't it be more painful than that even with saliva? Saliva dries really fast. Other than that good scene
guest chapter 20 . 12/28/2015
by that i mean pax's dad and how feels about him being happy i think my autocorrect changed the name
guest chapter 20 . 12/28/2015
i want my babies to be happy but that looks like it's already happening so maybe something with how the parents take the news specifically alex's dad
AnonymousProclamations chapter 20 . 12/11/2015
I like this story and I agree that you should shut it down soon. You don't want to overplay it and it seems pretty popular. I hope for maybe one or two more conflicts that focus on people not accepting them or bullying. I feel like right now the story is in a weird loop of not being realistic, but I understand as this is a really odd ball situation so. . . Eh.

I am definitely ready for a rap up in a few chapters and I don't really have much else to say. It was enjoyable and a new plot from others. I don't think it is one of my favorites, but I can definitely see why someone would love it. Great stuff. I'll check out more works from you another time. :)
RealLngComentSry chapter 20 . 12/9/2015
No way! You totally can't end this, I'll miss it to much! There should maybe just be juuuuust a couple chapter about them in a relationship and like, a year later, but if you do make only one more chapter, I hope it's not a giant time skip, just like the next day! Cause I think it would be cute to keep their relationship a cute in the now still not used to this thing to end it off. Unless to you made like a couple more chapter of them still getting used to it over a couple weeks, them like, a year later and they're still 100% in love. Ending with giant time skips over a year just makes me to emotional :')
Fryvi chapter 20 . 12/9/2015
I like happy endings, and so I like this one
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