Brilliant.

I hope you are going to continue this, because Im getting quite addicted to it...
I always get addicted to stories which I read and my mind just...plays it out like a movie ''

Dont give up on this story, okay? I bet this one will have quite a few followers if there are more chapters~

Oh my God. This seriously gets better and better by the chapter (and it's only chapter 2!).
Aw. Edward! I feel so sad for him! So bad! Oh my God! The emotions!
I am so excited to see what you have planned for this story! I cannot wait to read more! (I can wait, don't worry )
Good luck updating!

I am seriously hooked right now. One chapter and I'm practically addicted!
Oh my God. The emotions! I seriously don't know how to feel right now... I feel sad, but then I feel a little happy, and then I feel sad again and then I feel like my heart is going to explode and then-
It's complicated. That's the word for it. Seriously complicated.
This idea you have here is brilliant. Seriously. Fucking. Brilliant. Excuse my language.
There are so many different things I can see happening in this story that it's almost overwhelming, but also so intriguing. I just... it's amazing is what it is. Amazing, brilliant, beautiful, awesome, cool... okay, I have a lot of words along that line that could be said, but I have a feeling that FictionPress is only going to let me post a few of them since there are so many...
I cannot wait to read more! Okay, I can wait, don't worry. No pressure...
I am so excited to read this story! You seriously don't know the half of it!
If you have time, I'd love to see what you think of one of my own stories. Don't feel obliged though. Please.
Thank you so much for posting this story! I appreciate it! Update soon!
Good luck! :)