Reviews for Precious Time
MysteriousFire chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
Very nice!
I was wondering if this was some science-fiction-ish technology that shows you how much time you have left in your life, but it actually was a device that inserted poison :( Poor main character.
One minor typo in the last line: "what if time were to stop" - not "where" ;)
Nice short story!