Reviews for Dark Beginings
BradytheJust chapter 1 . 2/17/2016
Woah! A lot of crazy action scenes in this chapter. You did a good job describing the scenes and I'm really excited to see what happens next.
The only constructive criticism that I have is I noticed a lot of tense shifts between first and third person. I think the story would flow a lot better if you stayed in third person.
Anyway keep it up! :D
HSH chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
Hey, I really liked it. Keep it up :)