Great little story! I've enjoyed it :)

'She believed him... okay maybe not the dinosaur part'- that made me laugh haha.

This is a really interesting concept! It seems like a lot happened so fast but I'm still enjoying it so far! :)

Sounds like an interesting story.

I'd like to suggest you make a correction in your introduction.

"...when her and stranger Toby..."

Her should be she. Bad grammar in an introduction can turn readers off, keep them from reading more.