|Reviews for Crescent Island|
| Jaya Avendel chapter 15 . 9/19/2018
Serene's troubled emotions and self-blame were very clear here. I love how the thoughts of all her family rang in her head at once like a hurricane.
Luna was very supportive of her sister and helped her calm down. I love Robin and Felix's comment about "woman!". It lead up to the tense moment of discovery in the warehouse well.
Looking forward to Silver and Dust and most likely a hard fight.
| RainbowPearls chapter 8 . 9/2/2018
Lol, this chapter could gave been even titled "When Serene Falls in love" xD
I seriously agree with Midnight because you automatically feels hunger when you're on such am important work. Fallena will definitely try to keep her curls and hair more clear and proper seeing this attractive man ;')
I'm glad that there is some romance ahead! '
| RainbowPearls chapter 7 . 9/1/2018
So sweet. ;)
The best part was a Robin saying that it isn't a very good boat if it sinks down. Lol yeah- brothers should be like this- cool and funny rather than stern and commanding xD
I'm glad that Serene knows swimming or else Fallena must have teased her kneading no crack in that xD And what a boat that is- yeah it does seems specially for the fast speed driving looking how the island was receding in size so fast ;)
| Jaya Avendel chapter 14 . 8/30/2018
Fallena could not help asking Serene about boys, could she? It would be like a sister to want to utilize her sister's gifts in as many ways as possible!
Rhea is, in fact, a child, and I like how her awaking during the meeting with Verity showed that. Whoever Verity and her companions are, they are good in terms of fighting ability and dark in terms of what they want and what they will do to get it.
I feared Serene and Fallena would be taken! Fallena fought like a mad woman, more concerned about her appearance then ever and furious any filth would dare touch her.
As for the enemies, they possess strange and powerful gifts. I only hope Ulrick does not reach Rhea's other half before Serene.
Looking forward to The Key
| Jaya Avendel chapter 13 . 8/30/2018
I love Rhea. She is so calm and sweet and peaceful; you have captured the essence of an angel well. I love how Serene introduced her family, especially Robin as the "big silly one".
Being in the presence of an angel humbled Luna as Rhea rattled off her list of languages. As for Felix, he got excluded from the big, happy family!
Fallina is not as smart as she is pretty if she does not know what fraternal twins are! But having another angel's gift adds to the adventure. I hope no one dark has captured the sister, and that Serene can find her. Maybe she will be as pleasant as Rhea.
Looking forward to The Family.
| RainbowPearls chapter 6 . 8/22/2018
Oh Serene, you aren't selfish. You're just too much worried. That's not what we regularly come across. If it were me, I'd have compelled my reluctant siblings to join me. The opposite.
Fallena is a little too self conscious. That made me chuckle how she continually and constantly brushed her locks.
Robin and Oona seems a perfect couple. It's just amazing how they openly hold each other in arms- they aren't even married (I guess)
The way you describe the physique and appearance of characters like 'defying gravity', 'pressed hips', 'corkscrew curls' makes it more beautiful and east to envisage and bond an attraction towards the characters! :'D
| RainbowPearls chapter 5 . 8/20/2018
This is beautiful. The way you described her connections and feelings about her sister is so perfect and indescribable in words.
Fallena made me chuckle in the start. She's so infallibly beautiful. Lol. Robin and Oona- yeah they do resemble like a couple.
At last, I felt connected to Serene as she says that it's hard to smile. A feeling I truly could decipher.
| Jaya Avendel chapter 12 . 8/16/2018
I expected the Angel's gift to be a smoking meteor or a sparkling falling star so I love the twist. The moment Serene broke into the hut, I had a feeling the bound prisoner was the Gift but I was not certain.
Serene wreaked some serious chaos but she came away with her prize alright. I love Fallena's cooing, and Serene's return remark: "You could always check if you like?" I cannot see Fallena checking!
I am looking forward to meeting the Angel's Gift! Looking forward to Drastically Misplaced.
| Jaya Avendel chapter 11 . 8/16/2018
I love how dear Robin got everyone lost. Seeing the family wandering around in the middle of the forest was amusing, as they began to snap at each other and exchange snippy comments.
I cannot say how spot-on Serene's intuition is but at least she led them somewhere while everyone else was clustered around the map. It was good of Felix to stand by and support her instinct.
Looking forward to The Town Of Bamidele.
| Jaya Avendel chapter 10 . 8/12/2018
I love the way you showed the wolves breaking through the trees. The intensity of the battle was done well, especially with Serene thrown into fury by the tear in her dress. Everyone has a breaking point when they throw away control.
I loved Serene's thoughts as she watched Felix and his wolf battle, seeing it as a sort of game. The way you showed it made their fight seem like a brilliant dance.
I liked Fallena's move with the ice. It was bloody but effective and when you have a boy to impress, a girl will do anything. Including break her nail.
I love how the battle ended on the note of Fallena mourning the least serious thing in existence. Midnight's little jibe made me giggle.
Looking forward to A Sort Of Attraction.
| Jaya Avendel chapter 9 . 8/12/2018
I like Felix. And all the sister's reacted to him differently with ways unique of their characters. I think Felix might come between Serene and Fallena.
Midnight and Luna were more interested in Felix's life then the boy himself while Fallena did not miss a chance to show her smile. But it seems Felix has his eyes more set on Serene then her dazzling sister, and Serene is feeling love for the first time.
Robin appears to be mistrustful but I think he is annoyed he is not the only boy in the group anymore!
I cannot wait to see what Felix can do. His attitude over the werewolves seems casual and full of confidence.
Rushing on to Little Buggers.
| RainbowPearls chapter 4 . 8/9/2018
Uhh, I understand Serene's fears and reluctance for the task. She doesn't want her family members to be hurt. I can understand since she's very close lime she says even Fallena who fights and bickers with her a lot.
The training session was cool. It was almost like the elements of beyblades (like someone flares in wind, or ice, fire, water, sand, snow etc) so this fiction was familiar and way too interesting. I like speed if Serene. ;)
(Fire beats Ice; just [encase] you didn't know.) - [in case]
| Jaya Avendel chapter 8 . 8/8/2018
I loved Serene's explanation of what Dhampirs are.
"Sort of like vegetarians actually." I was wondering what Serene meant, and then the following line put it in perspective perfectly. "Meaning we do not eat humans!"
I think that was my favorite bit of the chapter up until Serene came face to face with the newcomer and all her feelings drained away. I do not think Fallena will ever let her live it down now that she is standing there, gripping his hand with goggling eyes. '
Fallena certainly knows plenty about men's aftershave! I can picture her now, the Barbie unpack-aged, strutting around in an unfamiliar terrain. One cannot say the Crescents do not walk out to find the Angel's Gift without style.
Looking forward to meeting our dearly beloved Felix.
| Jaya Avendel chapter 7 . 8/8/2018
Not a boat. I loved the line. I thought it meant something in the sense of GROANING "not a boat", so I loved the twist.
As for Robin, since he is so grounded I am surprised he jumped in and was ready to whirl away over the water. It is a good thing Fallena skipped the heels or she might have popped the duckie as soon as she set foot on the deck. Besides, who cares about falling off when you might get your skirt wet instead? Oh, the horrors!
I love Fallena's character. Her overlooking of the important for more trivial things such as her appearance give her personality.
I share Serene's thoughts. Heroes setting out in a yellow duckie boat will not be the weirdest thing to happen yet!
Marching on to Leaf Off.
| RainbowPearls chapter 2 . 8/8/2018
I liked Serene's siblings. They are so cute.
Especially, Midnight. She's so adorable.
So sweet of them gifting her with so many gifts! How lovely!
I hope, she will make them proud! :)