Reviews for Crescent Island
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
This is a really solid first chapter. You've done a great job of introducing your character, as well as the world she lives in, wonderfully. My only real suggestion would be to go through and do a little more proof reading, as you have a few minor errors scattered throughout, such as: "...will return to the island with the gift in hand." "main roll was to stay here [in case] of..."

I really enjoy how she describes being quick as a fortunate inheritance rather than a power, and I also appreciate how you specifically mention that you have to put your name in for consideration for the task, as it brings up mystery right from the start. Well done.
BradytheJust chapter 4 . 1/1/2016
Another great chapter!
I like the description of the fight scene with Luna and Selene especially the description of all the elements, and having the control in power compared to singing (as a musician myself I can appreciate it)
Can't wait to see the adventure start! :)
BradytheJust chapter 3 . 11/11/2015
Well...well...well that was unexpected!
Where to begin?
I loved the word association game (made me shiver!) Learning about the guardians was good, I love getting into the backgrounds of worlds. I also liked hearing Serene's and her sisters' perspectives on boys.
Another great chapter and I can't wait to read more about this family road trip adventure thingie! :)
BradytheJust chapter 2 . 10/23/2015
Another great chapter!
I loved Midnight giving out the gift, (because that's my little sister when she tries to get me clothes...and I hate getting clothes, but she does it anyway!)
I also loved the phrase "Lamenting for the loss that hadn't even happened yet." Nice job and I want more! :)
BradytheJust chapter 1 . 10/23/2015
Whoa! This story is going to be amazing!
I could see everything in my mind's eye and I loved the ending especially. I hope Serene fulfills her destiny!
Can't wait for more!
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