I sadly have lost all interest in this story even thought I believe it was well and thought out.

Please fix the title ... i before e ... it's a bit off-putting to see the title miss-spelt

I enjoyed it. It had a few sentence flow issues, but nothing major. The story was still nice. I'm going to read the rest even if I dont review every chapter (Im bad at reviewing). Oh and I like how they met in high school and everything, it's romantic in an innocent, young kind of way. Good work, keep writing!