Reviews for Mentally Amoured
Chiisutofupuru chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
Another cute story. Though this one lacks a bit of 'showing' in my opinion.
For example: The part where the girl called out "watch it", all we got was him open his eyes looking at her when we prolly should have seen him stop dead in his tracks and/or avoid something (which is where the flailing of his arms would make sense).