|Reviews for Shut Up And Dance With Me|
| Turtle72 chapter 1 . 4/13/2019
Oh man, every time I read this chapter I cry with laughter. My daughter was feeling sad so I read it to her and she cried with laughter too. Best beginning ever.
| Blue Rose Ink chapter 4 . 10/18/2016
This was beautiful!
| TooLazyToLogIn chapter 4 . 8/7/2016
Great story! Totally adorable, like one dimple kinda adorable XD
| exsomnis chapter 2 . 12/20/2015
I LOVE this story. This is a fantastic work of art.
| Sally chapter 4 . 9/7/2015
That's the best story I've read on Fictionpress since stumbling upon this website a few years ago! Not only is there no sign of badly written English, a miracle on this site, but it was balanced, hilarious, not a silly cliche overdone too much, but highly enjoyable as a whole. Please write more!
| ElskeMelske chapter 4 . 9/5/2015
Even your summary made me laugh! Great job!
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/5/2015
Hahaha, best story ever
| echogirlcapri chapter 1 . 9/5/2015
Hilarious :P I can lick my elbow and that weirds people out so i can relate!
| Aquade chapter 4 . 9/5/2015
Aww. This was a humorous and sweet story. :)
I like the way thing ended up, and hey, they have an interesting story to tell when people ask them how they met. 'Well, we met in an elevator when it broke down, and...' XD
| Unknown chapter 3 . 8/31/2015
I actually thought that they both knew that they were in the elevator together!...that didn't make sense. I'll try this again. I though that he knew she was the insane person in the elevator and that she knew he was the swooning man from the elevator!..that's better. Well, guess they know now.
At least I'm not the only one who loves chocolate strawberries! Pineapple just doesn't sound good.
I loved the part with the horror movie an the overprotective husband. I just don't understand how he can be overprotective when they already got married. Guess he's more overprotective than I thought.
Yay! This story isn't gonna end so soon! I'm so happy! I can't wait to find out how you're gonna make part four! But I bet it's gonna be hilarious!
Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseupdate soon! I'm sorry I didnt review sooner, but you can't leave me hanging! I love this story as much as I live your other ones, so please, UPDATE SOON! Even if it will be the last chapter.*sigh* ...*sniff*...please?...I did say please, right?
| leavesfallingup chapter 2 . 8/27/2015
She is an interesting character. From the reaction of the men in her life... except for elevator guy... I assume that she is pretty, you don't offer any other detail
| Somebody New chapter 2 . 8/26/2015
Whoa, this is awesome. I loved Esi straight on from the excorcist impressions. Can't wait to see what you do!
| Unknown chapter 2 . 8/21/2015
Chocolate covered strawberries. My absolute favorite thing, besides a bunch of other things that make their way into my mouth. Although I love pineapple, it just doesn't taste as amazing to me. But that's probably just me. Who knows?
Donuts! Is it doughnuts? Or donuts? I can never tell which is which. I use donuts only because it's shorter.
Stupid boss. How come most bosses love money more than anything and get upset when they have to pay more? It's not right.
Great story! Funny as always and I can't wait to read more! Update soon! Please! It will do wonders for my soul! :D
...please?...fine. I give up. No one's listening to me. *sniff*...WAAAAAAHH!.*sniff* *sniff*...*breathe*
*ahem* I'm good. :)
| guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2015
Is micah the main love interest? I hope so and that he has a connection to the elevator and wedding guys so we can see more of them, but anyway like wheeze would say on dragon tail Loove it.
| Unknown chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
I take it you really enjoy listening to that song. Am I right?... Don't worry, I love it too. You shall not be alone in this world for I am here as well! Yay! Heroic music start playing my theme song!...
...crap. I forgot I had no theme song. *sigh* How sad. :(
Excorsist part was hilarious! Who would want to be in an elevator with an insane person when it's not moving? Apparently not Micah!
The dancing was funny as well. An I totally agree with you on the raspberry filling. Who in their right mind would make suh a disaster?! 'Tis a total disgrace to cake and dessert. Shame shame shame. And one more for good measure:shame.
Can't wait for part two! I can only imagine what fun you have concocted for the next section. :)
'Till next time, Adios, caio, goodbye, alfeenazay(hopefully you can make out what I tried and failed to spell(hopefully)).
Please update soon! It shall fill my heart with rainbows!