Reviews for Cry of the Mer
Lumin Petrichor chapter 37 . 7/3
This story was an absolute wild fucking ride from start to finish but it was so good. The first 14 chapters or so were absolutely awful (In terms of describing Luna and Katie's experiences), but after that thjngs really started to pick up and I was so happy when they got out of there. At the same time, I was constantly on edge every second that they weren't yet safe with Sophie. I was all too aware that the facility could track Luna and Katie down and take them away at any time, and I was so scared that they would. Even at the end when they were at the aquatic park with Sophie and Lewis I was in deep disbelief, because I was waiting for the catch. I still...worry that there is one in the future. But they're safe, and I'm really happy about that.

Phenomenal story!
Lumin Petrichor chapter 6 . 6/26
This was such a gut-wrenching chapter, I really hope Luna's okay :(
Lumin Petrichor chapter 5 . 6/26
I love Katie and Luna's dynamic so much, it's so sweet ;-; I'm really happy I found this story
Ultidragonlord chapter 1 . 6/23/2021
Man, last I read this was back in 2018 but now I see there's more than however many chapters there were last time.

Time to start from the beginning!
Anna Banana chapter 1 . 12/30/2018
I’m really sad about this.. :( and that we have to pay for patreon. I was really enjoying this story and think you did an amazing job. I would love it if you posted the remaining chapters. :(
Ultidragonlord chapter 9 . 3/20/2018
Sometimes you just want to hit someone with a truck don't you?

This story is really good but because someone decided to be all "I'm gonna steal this story. Those fools will never know" Well how did that turn out for ya?!

Anyway I enjoy this story anyway, even thiugh I couldn't finish it.
I HATE YOU chapter 1 . 11/17/2017
You copied my friends work! She spent so long on that book, only for you to steal it! She's quit writing it now, are you happy?
Guest chapter 9 . 11/16/2017
Pleeease try to put the rest here! I don't think I can live without it!
Allie-the-Cat chapter 7 . 11/16/2017
I really like the name Bailey, and I'm glad that's the one she got. I can't wait to find out what she wrote! Amazing chapter, amazing book... written by an amazing author!
Allie-the-Cat chapter 6 . 11/16/2017
Noooo! Stay alive Luna!
Allie-the-Cat chapter 5 . 11/16/2017
I got your (hint hint, nudge nudge, wink wink) so I'll go right ahead
Great chapter! This is one of the best stories I've ever read! You should really try to get this published!
Allie-the-Cat chapter 4 . 11/16/2017
I hate you Dr Patron!
Allie-the-Cat chapter 3 . 11/16/2017
The pain in this story actually makes me start aching sometimes. It's very detailed and realistic!
Allie-the-Cat chapter 2 . 11/16/2017
Great chapter!
The Age of Awesomeness chapter 9 . 11/16/2017
That’s horrid! I hope you can deal with the people plagiarizing your work dealt with.
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