Reviews for Cry of the Mer
AnaCloud4 chapter 17 . 10/4/2017
Loved this chapter a lot!
AnaCloud4 chapter 16 . 10/4/2017
I'm not really worried about the intelligence thing. Wouldn't it be better, with them knowing she's not just a fish? Though they might just cut open her brain... Ya never know.
Ana Cloud chapter 14 . 10/4/2017
I like Elizabeth! She's like the new.. And actually nice.. Jenny! But better!

I hope the pen-pal thing works out!

I'll take a chocolate cookie, please!
Ana Cloud chapter 13 . 10/4/2017
So sad! I actually teared up! (And I NEVER tear up.)

Poor Sophie... I wish she could know that Katie is alive.. But then she'd do whatever she could to get her out, and I don't think she cold do anything about the legs. But she could stick her in an exhibit... :P Also, the scientist people wouldn't take kindly to that...
Xavier Rall chapter 38 . 9/25/2017
Surprisingly emotional and entertaining story. Hope to see more from this.
LucyRowanVictoria chapter 38 . 8/30/2017
So, will we ever know Riley's secret siblingry with Luna for sure?

You can just call me Lucy.
John Spangler chapter 1 . 8/25/2017
Hello, I just wanted to say how much I've enjoyed this story. It's really amazing. At first I didn't believe that a story about mermaids could be so interesting, but I'm happy to say that I was wrong. It's been a pleasure to read it, and I loved every single chapter (even though the ending seems a little rushed to me. I would have been glad to read more, maybe something where Katie goes back to normal and Luna meets her family, but even this way is fine with me. You are the author, and you decide what to write). So, thanks for writing this chapter, and good luck with your other stories.
Serinphora chapter 38 . 8/20/2017
I am really more just honestly confused. I hope everything is ok? Chapter 35 you had been promising the scene of the mers meeting and you were excited to for it. We've even discussed before hand about the scientists being dealt with. What happened, if its alright to ask about why the story has been cut so short? I hope everything is ok and you find your muse again so that the other stories will benefit, but it is sad that once a story is given up on there is no reason to continue on with it or it will only suffer. So while its sad this story ended well before its time it did end on a high...ish point but its better that it ends now then suffer later on. Good luck with your other stories.
Guest chapter 38 . 8/17/2017
Thank you for writing this. I loved every chapter, it's been a good couple of years. It was good to end it here, before it got bloated. Good luck on your future projects.
Anon chapter 38 . 8/13/2017
this was a good place to end on, and thank you for ending this story in this way. Take the time you need to, we'lol see you after the haitus
trodrian chapter 38 . 8/10/2017
I really enjoyed reading this story and hope you will consider a sequel. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Athalo North chapter 38 . 8/9/2017
Ok... yep... good... wait... WHAT! That's all there is for the last chapter?

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Yes it was good but, Riley, what about her?

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Possible sequel...? No, probably not.

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Another story. Hmm interesting thought *****. I like hiw you think.

Well it wasn't everything I hoped for but it was still acceptable in the best possible way I'm really happy that I found the story almost 2 years ago and I'm really happy I stuck with it and I'm glad that you're back, to some degree.

I loved Sophie, the best mother character I've read in a while. Well done.

And yes chat we shall, at your earliest convince.

Until next time, your humble reader and friend,
Athalo
Dreslief chapter 38 . 8/9/2017
I half expected all 3 me in the finale.
Kae-Leah W chapter 13 . 7/17/2017
Yay, someone else with the headcanon that merfolk don't poop! I've been told that that's far-fetched biologically because like that children's book says "Everybody Poops", but I just can't imagine a mermaid "going to the bathroom", or maybe I'm just so prudish that I don't want my fave fantasy creatures to have the indignity of doing saying a dolphin-like fecal plume, at least not in a very visible manner, but you figured out a very well-thought out way to get around that issue: a complex stomach with many chambers that digests food completely. I also have this idea in my head that they secrete excess nutrients through their scales that is odorless and mostly invisible to the naked eye.
Athalo North chapter 37 . 7/14/2017
Payback indeed, well played my lady, well played.

Sophie's pov on this chapter was well placed, anyone else's would have been a little bit odd to read as a call down period and adjustment time for Luna and Katie.

And now someone has put the anchovies on pizza and they liked it! WHY, WHAT HAS THIS WORLD COME TO!? (Side note pineapple is ok to put on pizza, just not fish... of any kind.)
Ok got that off my chest.

Great chapter, and great setup for the next.
Can't wait for Riley to appear ;P

Your humble friend and cowriter, Athalo.

Ps. I have so many plans for the future :D
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