Reviews for Too Little, Too Late
cardiff1984 chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
Makes you wonder, if Jackson was really trapped and he was waiting for the right time, for Gloria to succumb to a grizzly end, just so he could have the freedom and money all to himself.
Aske Nat chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
I love stories that start in medias res; it makes for a very intense beginning, and you used it well. While I found this well-written and interesting, I'm not entirely sure I buy the pace. Jackson is very quick to accept his impending death; I would've expected a bit more emotional turmoil.

Anyway, it was still definitely worth a read.

Happy writing,

Aske Nat