Amazing stuff. Couldn't fault it xxx

WHY CAN'T I WRITE LIKE THIS? Your English is probably better than mine, and I'm American :D I have done some writing, but my poetry never flows like yours. Maybe I'll put it on fictionpress one day... :D

Pain in slow motion. Told with a cloud of resolve and defeat, with a sadness that lingers and darkens in the end. I hope she finds a way out... a new day brings a new sun... Thanks for sharing, ZB.

So sad! But again, relatable. We all know that feeling of loss. You are fantastic at getting emotion across in just a few words. I love that! My favorite line was: He departs with the sun as my world turns to night. SO GOOD.

Just a couple typos: "through" instead of "though" in the first line and "ecstasy" instead of "extacy" (I freaking hate spelling that word haha).

I'm done stalking your work now :)