Reviews for Frail Shells
Blueberry Poetry chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
HI! I really like your poem, but I think a few things could be reworded. Like at the very end, instead of "this", I would put "his". I think it just fits a little better. And one thing I think poetry writers never take enough advantage of is alliteration. It makes all the words just fit together so nicely. Other wise I think its great! Continue and you will only get better! :)