Reviews for The Smokers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Using the process of getting up and going to school as a way of telling about the different characters is rather brilliant. The pacing was good, the writing even better, and I find myself wanting to know more about the whole group; a rare thing, as I tend to have favorites. Nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good so far! I really like it! I'm interested in how the story's going to go, so I really want another chapter, hahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's always difficult to judge a story by a prologue like this, but you still managed to intrigue me; I'll be keeping an eye out for the first chapter. I noticed a few typos and misplaced commas, and even a little hiccup with tense, but all in all, it wasn't bad. However, I would advice you to break it down in smaller paragraphs; they are quite large. |