Wonderful job with this story!
I could see everything in my mind's eye, the battle scenes were fantastic, and the characters were so real and easy to relate to.
The trial at the end was a nice touch, and I think it shows something that most writers (including myself until now) have never thought about. "Who's going to clean all the damage up?"
I also loved Alice's battle with her inner demons, and her memories of Treyce.
I'm going to turn to a PM to do this story review justice, but for my final thoughts this was a twelve out of ten story!
Keep it up! :)

Great job finishing up!

Very good start I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

Great story, I love it! Is she one of Santa's elves?

Haha, it's funny they think she's only 14 when she's really 23! Why do they tho? Does she look really young?

Well, great story!

Peace,

Toto