|Reviews for Chance|
| Turning Empty Pages chapter 1 . 9/10/2015
The creative writing prompt sounds like fun. I wish my creative writing teacher had thought of that.
The story was short and to the point. It was a nice little read.
| Aske Nat chapter 1 . 9/10/2015
I think that the two author notes might actually be longer than the story itself, and you really don't need to go into so much detail about the process; if people are curious about it, they will most likely ask.
As for the story... well, it was short. I think there are areas that could be explored a bit more to give the story more depth, like for instance how Jones appears to be squeamish about homosexuality. You don't have to tell us everything about the characters, but there should be purpose behind every little detail that is either easily read or at least something the reader can build upon.