Reviews for About a girl
rchll chapter 1 . 10/8/2015
I really enjoyed this poem! I thought your imagery and general descriptions were wonderful. I needed to Google "Zarathustra" & recognized it as soon as I started listening to it on YouTube. Some of the longer lines were a little wordy. I think they'd benefit from becoming two lines. I loved the ending - "She was once mind, for all that I can tell,/ She was once yours for all that I know." Beautiful.