|Reviews for Tales from Oshima: Spanked by a Ghost|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2015
I really enjoyed this. It was really original and creative. However, I would advise you to go back over this and work on your grammar (their/there, were/where) and spellings ( fingers, gesture, responsibilities etc). Don't let that detract from the fact you wrote a wonderful story. It just needs a little more work. I look forward to your next one!