|Reviews for The Pull|
| hannahward chapter 20 . 1/30/2017
Great to see an update. Alex can still be frustrating and I hope they work things out soon :)
| hannahward chapter 19 . 12/7/2016
Aww, great story, glad they seem to have sorted things out now. :)
| J chapter 19 . 11/13/2016
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE PLEASE ITS KILLING ME I LOVE THIS STORY GAH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEE UPDATE
| rad-Shay chapter 19 . 8/11/2016
Natalie and Alex are so sweet together!
Really enjoying the character development of both Natalie and Alex as well.
Can't wait for the next update!
| IcanzIIravor chapter 19 . 8/3/2016
I'm glad Alex swallowed his pride and put his feelings for Natalie out there on the line. They have both been through a lot, so it was important he actually put himself out there and didn't back down to take the easy way. Glad he and his brother will get to talk and air some things out too.
Still a lot of unfinished business out there for everyone, but this was an important first step.
| Puccapurple chapter 19 . 8/2/2016
Yes! You're back! I'm glad Nat is okay and that she forgave Alex. I'm pretty sure that Yvette b!tch is responsible for her being admitted at the hospital. Thank you for updating.
P.s. I hope you update your other stories soon because I love all of them.
| Ree Adrianne chapter 18 . 6/12/2016
It's my first time reading stories from Fiction Press and this one got my attention.
This story reminds me of The Breakfast Club, All That, and 10 Things I hate about you, all mushed up together. And I loved those movies. Albeit some grammatical mistakes (which is nothing to get too worked up about btw), it's safe to say that really liked your story.
First, I’m impressed how you weaved the story together. It's quite refreshing to see it in a first POV told by two different perspectives. I like the idea that there are two very different (opposite maybe) roads represented by the main characters that converged together as the story progressed, which created the dichotomy between Alex and Natalie.
Second, I like how fleshed out the characters were. They weren't they typical stereotypes you see in high school stories. You can see their imperfections and how they struggle with it, to be real to themselves while trying to make ends meet -which the reader can empathize with. It is also essential to note, that the use of Shane and the others is a wonderful representation that peers are just important when it comes to building an identity and how it affects a person in general. They also push the main characters to the light. However, it would be even better if the secondary characters are fleshed out even more to balance the main charas since they tend to be quite one dimensional.
Third, the story flow is just right. The romance builds up in a gradual pace which is quite realistic. Honestly, I rather have it that way than the love at first sight type of plot line.
I would like to ramble more, but I figured that this all I have to say for now. And I'm looking forward to the future chapters. So yeah, good job!
| Nble2 chapter 18 . 6/10/2016
I don't really like leaving reviews because I don't know how to construct a nice concise paragraph so I'm just going to do it in dot points
1. HOW CAN YOU LEAVE US WITH SUCH A CLIFFHANGER
2. You made my ovaries burst when Alex looked at Nat and said "she's the one"
3. You made me realize how nonexistent my love life is
4. Why can't I find an Alex in my life
5. There were so many plot twists
6. Everyone has such a good back story (which is rare)
7. Johnny actually sounds really cool
8. Grant's a dick, I hope he has a secret crush on Nat
9. I ship Nat and Alex (if you couldn't already tell)
10. I love how long your chapters are
11. Thanking the lord for my decision to read this story
12. I love you for existing
| Puccapurple chapter 18 . 6/8/2016
Dun dun dun! I really can't wait for the next update. Great job on this chapter author. Keep it up!
| Astronomia chapter 17 . 5/12/2016
I hate Christian so much; why does he have to get in the way and almost ruin everything?
I only have good things to say about this story. You've created really amazing characters with wonderful backgrounds and stories, and I have adored getting to know them. I'm also happy with the way that you developed Alex and Natalie's relationship - it wasn't rushed but it wasn't too slow either, and it is realistic yet also being the type of relationship that helps you escape reality. It's such a brilliant story, and I can't wait to read more.
| Astronomia chapter 14 . 5/12/2016
Delano's like the Godfather of the school or something hahahaha
| Astronomia chapter 13 . 5/12/2016
Breakfast Club moment.
Loving this story :)
| http.thatrandomgirl chapter 17 . 5/9/2016
OMG...I literally have no other words haha. This story is AMAZING! I've been sat here reading it all night and I'm addicted basically :D please update soon because I neeeed to know what happens!
| xxSongBirdxx chapter 17 . 5/8/2016
yes another update. I really hope Alex does talk to Natalie otherwise prince will come along and steal her