Hi there! I like the way you construct the story and how the series of events were presented. The pacing is neither fast nor slow. I'm excited to see how things would come together for the main characters. Well done! Now that you got me curiosity perked up, I want to read your other stories so I have a lot of catching up to do. Your hard work will surely pay off and it's a good talent to have that no one can take away from you.

This is one of the best fics I've read here! I don't understand why you haven't got more reviews! Your spelling is correct, your chapters long and perfectly clean and the plot is a-mazing! Love this so much, and I hope to see the next chapter in the future. This is the best ever... : P

haha really liked this! especially the end scene, I could totally relate to that situation with the car haha!
Great work!

NEW STOOORY!
you're quick woooho! I like the start of this story, very excited to see where this is going.
And I'm very happy that I will be able to be a part of another journey with one of your stories.

Interesting beginning :)

Nice beginning! Looking forward for more!

Good introduction to their main characters and a small peak into their lives. I like that you've set up their reputation and relationships with those around them right away but still left some mystery as to their life as a whole. It'll be interesting to see what kind of affect they'll have on each other. Keep up the good work.