"There was about six smiley emojis at the end of the message and it caused her to visibly shudder." hahahaha I do that when I see too many emojis in a message.
Very well written. I was headed back to your profile to catch up on Elements, and saw you had a few new stories so I thought I'd give them a look. So far, I'm not letdown. Great narration, very good pacing, and you show that you have a great grasp on writing as an art. You've got me curious about Ashlin and what her aim is, exactly. Keep it up!