Reviews for RaisingDad III |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nobody in action movies wears earmuffs... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heyb NCIS is great! Although my husband dislikes it too... are you all jealous of Mark Harmon, or something? He's not all that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They say friends are the family you choose for yourself... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Non-punctuality drives me up the wall. Especially if I'm the one who's late. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Better "it's cold" than "it's hot." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, man, your day sounds about on par with ours. Maybe I should take to humor columns for stress relief, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know. The sounds are enough to drive you absolutely crazy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At least the conversation moved along. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Gargling* and then *drinking* your tea? ...*ew.* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I'd say he could, except we just got evicted and don't have a spare seat in the car. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting first chapter. I really liked the section where you say "well... That's what I felt like doing". Really showed your characters personality and restraint without being heavy handed about it. I did notice a few slips here and there, such as at the near end: "My, dad, meanwhile..." The comma between my and dad should be removed I think. And lastly, a question - is the man his father or his wife's father? It felt more like he was talking about a father in law, than his own dad. I enjoyed this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Look on the bright side - my mother falls asleep while driving, and she's the only one in the family with a license! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd say you probably have the patience of a saint, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "...and thy Father which seeth in secret Himself shall reward thee openly." |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's an asterisk after the first omelet, but no footnote. Are you trying to share the love? |