|Reviews for Death academy|
| Zukafu Chiriamoto chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Starting out with a letter works well for a story like this. It gives a sense of authenticity, it provides information so works as an introduction. It provides the name of the focal
However, the format of a letter has to be followed through to make it work. It's also more imperative for good grammar and spelling - so proofreading is definitely needed to clear up these mistakes. As it is a very official letter, it needs to sound it too; so the tone needs to be informative, concise and formal.
This all said, the start is clear and the premise is very interesting. I am very interested to see where this will lead. Happy Writing!
| Aske Nat chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
Considering the premise of the story, it's a good idea starting off with a letter, but you really need to proofread. The are many mistakes such as typos, misplaced commas and lack of capitalization.
Overall, I like the idea, but the execution could be better.