|Reviews for Homosexuality Is Not A Sin|
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
I like the point of this, and you raise some good points. Most especially, I love that you not only state your views, but also acknowledge and address the opposing view (slightly, through the child segment). Being able to fully acknowledge, and then address an opposing view is the basis for a persuasive essay, and is what separates it from just a rant.
That being said, there were some moments where the flow seemed a little off, or the word choice slightly out of place. Perhaps due to the emotions running?
Nevertheless, this was a solid start to something you could really turn into a persuasive piece.