Reviews for The Legend of Polysaccharine
VincentCC chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
I really like the narrator's tone, scientific yet amused, and this tiny cotton candy monster piqued my interest. Where did it come from? Or how was it created? And why must it commit this to us human beings? Of course none of these questions hold your story back, since you're narrating eyewitness events and not the monster's experience itself.

Good job.